Alpha Beta Feedback Please enable JavaScript in your browser to complete this form.Please enable JavaScript in your browser to complete this form.Name *FirstLastWhich Book Did You Read? *— Select Choice —Deliver UsGood Men Don’t Ask QuesionsSerial Killer Couple PlaybookCrab LogicThe Devil Don’t WhistleOpening Chapters Hook: How engaged were you by the end of the opening? *Not engagedSlightlyVeryFully hookedContinue: Would you keep reading past this point? *YesMaybeNoCharacters: Do you like/care about the main characters so far? *YesSomewhatNot YetNotes: Any issues or comments on the opening (confusion, pacing, tone, credibility, etc.)? *Middle Chapters Momentum: Did the middle keep your interest? *Yes, consistentlyMostlyIt lagged at timesIt dragged a lotWhere (if it lagged): If you felt a slowdown, where did it happen?Early middleMid-middleLate middleThird ChoiceNot sureOptional detailsClarity: Were you ever confused about what was happening or why? *NoA littleOften Did confused character If yesStakes: Did the stakes/tension increase through the middle? *YesSomewhatNoFelt repetitiveOne fix: What is the ONE change that would strengthen the middle most?Cut/trimAdd urgency/stakesClearer motivationsMore twists/surprisesStronger antagonist pressureOtherOptional commentEnding Chapters Momentum: Did the final chapters keep you turning pages? *YesMostlyIt SlowedI struggled to finishPayoff: Did the ending feel earned and satisfying? *YesMostlyNot reallyNoClarity: Was anything confusing in the climax/resolution? *NoA littleYesIf yesLoose ends: Did anything feel unresolved that should be resolved? *NoMaybeYesIf yesPlot / logic Plot/logic check: Did you notice any plot holes or “wait, that doesn’t make sense” moments? *YesMaybeNoIf yesCredibility: Did any character decision feel out of character or convenient for the plot? *NoMaybeYesIf yesProse / readability Prose readability: How did the writing feel to read overall? *Very smoothMostly smoothMixedOften clunky/unclearLine-level friction: What best describes the prose issues (if any)? (choose up to 2)Too wordyToo sparseRepetitiveHard to pictureOver-explainedDialogue felt unnaturalTone inconsistentOtherOptional commentOverall rating: How would you rate the book overall? *1 (poor)2345 (excellent)Plot Issues / Head Scratchers Chapter NumberDescribe The IssueChapter Number Describe The Issue Chapter Number Describe The Issue Chapter Number Describe The Issue Chapter Number Describe The Issue File Uploads or Screenshots File Upload Drag & Drop Files, Choose Files to Upload You can upload up to 10 files. Last Questions Read more: Would you read another book by this author (or in this series/world)? * Not at all Likely Extremely Likely 012345678910 Anything you would like to add?Submit