Alpha Beta Feedback Please enable JavaScript in your browser to complete this form.Please enable JavaScript in your browser to complete this form.Name *FirstLastWhich Book Did You Read? *— Select Choice —Deliver UsGood Men Don’t Ask QuesionsSerial Killer Couple PlaybookCrab LogicThe Devil Don’t WhistleOpening Chapters Hook: How engaged were you by the end of the opening? *Not engagedSlightlyVeryFully hookedContinue: Would you keep reading past this point? *YesMaybeNoCharacters: Do you like/care about the main characters so far? *YesSomewhatNot YetNotes: Any issues or comments on the opening (confusion, pacing, tone, credibility, etc.)? *Middle Chapters Momentum: Did the middle keep your interest? *Yes, consistentlyMostlyIt lagged at timesIt dragged a lotWhere (if it lagged): If you felt a slowdown, where did it happen?Early middleMid-middleLate middleThird ChoiceNot sureOptional detailsClarity: Were you ever confused about what was happening or why? *NoA littleOftenIf yesStakes: Did the stakes/tension increase through the middle? *YesSomewhatNoFelt repetitiveOne fix: What is the ONE change that would strengthen the middle most?Cut/trimAdd urgency/stakesClearer motivationsMore twists/surprisesStronger antagonist pressureOtherOptional commentEnding Chapters Momentum: Did the final chapters keep you turning pages? *YesMostlyIt SlowedI struggled to finishPayoff: Did the ending feel earned and satisfying? *YesMostlyNot reallyNoClarity: Was anything confusing in the climax/resolution? *NoA littleYesIf yesLoose ends: Did anything feel unresolved that should be resolved? *NoMaybeYesIf yesPlot / logic Plot/logic check: Did you notice any plot holes or “wait, that doesn’t make sense” moments? *YesMaybeNoIf yesCredibility: Did any character decision feel out of character or convenient for the plot? *NoMaybeYesIf yesProse / readability Prose readability: How did the writing feel to read overall? *Very smoothMostly smoothMixedOften clunky/unclearLine-level friction: What best describes the prose issues (if any)? (choose up to 2)Too wordyToo sparseRepetitiveHard to pictureOver-explainedDialogue felt unnaturalTone inconsistentOtherOptional commentOverall rating: How would you rate the book overall? *1 (poor)2345 (excellent)Plot Issues / Head Scratchers The Chapter Characters: Chapter NumberDescribe The IssueChapter Number Describe The Issue Chapter Number Describe The Issue Chapter Number Describe The Issue Chapter Number Describe The Issue File Uploads or Screenshots File Upload Drag & Drop Files, Choose Files to Upload You can upload up to 10 files. Last Questions Read more: Would you read another book by this author (or in this series/world)? * Not at all Likely Extremely Likely 012345678910 Anything you would like to add?Submit